Sparring partner - Intro

Ok this is just kind of the build up and looking for feedback (to long, to boring, just right not enough character development etc etc). Like most of the stuff I post its a first draft so please pardo_ Germaine:Why is all sex scenes in Game of Thrones in Doggy position?(14 August 2017) Malisa:High school guy girl [...]
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Keira:
I'm male, 19, and my brother is 14. For some reason he just LOVES to give people a massage.
(13 August 2017)

Tamera:
When can I call the police about my complaning neighbor?
(13 August 2017)

Tamera:
Can the police solve this issue?
(13 August 2017)

Tamera:
Now, the lady is home all day because she has no job.
(13 August 2017)

Tamera:
My toddler is asleep before 8 and wakes up between 7:30-8:30. Our landlord never answers calls, so I am thinking of calling the police because I am terrified to drop anything on the floor.
(13 August 2017)

Tamera:
We have a playmat all throughout our apartment besides our bathroom and the kitchen and we do not wear shoes in our apartment.
(13 August 2017)

Tamera:
She said okay, and applogized, but she still bangs.
(13 August 2017)

Tamera:
My daughter drops a toy, she bangs, she runs for 10 seconds, she bangs, almost everything.
(13 August 2017)

Tamera:
Newly moved in lady that lives below us bangs on the ceiling for every movement we make.
(13 August 2017)

Mechelle:
Is he actually interested in me or playing game with me?
(13 August 2017)